#2 Sentence

My sentence choice-"He shook his head sharply, closing his eyes, and then he turned to ragard me with a handsome mask of a face."
1)Sunday, Nov 4,2007
2)I read it on page 176 of Separate peace.
3)it has adverb phrase in middle sentence.
4)I like it because it reduced from adverb clause to abverb phrase.
5)My new sentence :" I got a visa, smiling my mind, and then I turned to smile with everyone around me!"